Threaten them by saying that if they dont back away, I will give them my disfigurement!!!! Thus, saving you and I!


If you were daningling above a pit of snakes, held only by a piece of rope that is tied to your feet... what would you do?

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I have a stuffed plushie of Anton Ego from the movie Ratatouille.

I had originally wanted to be an artist. But now that theatre has grabbed my attention, I am hoping to be a techie. Heck, maybe I will help out with the stage props and costumes as well to tie in my artistic side.

linguini

Slimy Salami

Considering I would never be so lucky to get the opportunity, it would probably be so that he could drag me down to kill me.

By all means, please.

Iced Mocha (ew. I hate them)

I still think he would love Davy Jones from Pirates of the Caribbean 2. It is a powerful instrumental song. Beautiul and I cannot get enough of it.

A few things have changed from the last time I posted. Such as, in my last post I explained that there would be an underwater city where the Prince made music illegal. I am cutting that entire part out of the story, and from where I am at in Chapter 12 will flow into what was going to be the third part of the book where a composer's band members seem to be acting rather strange, and yet play their instruments so perfectly... Could there be more to the band then the composer is telling?

Chapter 12 is up and running. Hope you enjoy!

http://s9.photobucket.com/albums/a100 ... iew¤t=Comic2031.jpg

These are the comments that run up through Chapter 12. The reason I draw only on the right side of the booklet is because I have comments(and my friend's comments) on the left side. Here they are:


Prolouge

The Demon has an oxygen mask on his face, NOT A BEAK
The doctor needs to look the same in my final copy, not different throughout the squares

Chapter 1, Part 2

Why does everyone love the pig?!

Chapter 2, Part 2

I HATE HOW THE FARMER LOOKS!! DON'T LOOK AT HIM!! HE'S HORRIBLE!!!!

Chapter 3, Part 2

I love how the old woman just dies

Chapter 3, Part 4

Orignally, Mordrid and Lucius were going to be Thieves, but I couldn't really tie them into the story unless they were magicians. Now, I am glad I have them the way they are.

Lucius has a real snake in his hat, Mordrid deals with birds.

Chapter 5, Part 3

Remember that it is only rumored that Cassandra and Jasper are in love. It may or may not be true.

My grandma said that Jasper looks like Michael Jackson. So I got angry and told her to get her eyes checked.

Chapter 5, Part 4

...Yes... well... that weird drawing at the bottom is suppose to be everyone around the campfire but...

Chapter 6, Part 1

STUPID RAINDROPS! Took so much precious time! I am forgetting about the ruler and just going to draw them whether they are squigglies or not!!

Chapter 6, Part 5

Mordird is a magician, remember. He used birds in his magic tricks. You can remember him spitting out a bird back when we first saw him and Lucius on stage at the circus.
I am well aware that the birds look like rubber duckies...

Chapter 7, Part 2

Friend's comment: I am just pointing out, the top square looks like a girl's face.. not Jaspers..

Chapter 7, Part 3

Picky, picky picky. Had to change A LOT on this page because so many people were getting annoying with the "Dress" that Jasper apparently wears. IT'S NOT A DRESS!!! So everyone was calling him a girl and a lesbian. *drawing of Jasper being angry is below the comment*

Chapter 8, Part 2

WOW! It's been a long time since I drew Lucius talking!

Chapter 8, Part 4

DUN DUN DUN!!!!!

Chapter 9, Part 2

Friend's Comment: *a picture of a random girl is screaming and saying "WHY CAN'T WE ALL JUST GET ALONG!?"*

Chapter 11, Part 4

If it was not obvious, the poem comes from Romeo and Juliet
For those who do not understand, in the 6th square, Cassandra is taking Jasper's hat.
In the last square, that quick sentance is also from Romeo and Juliet.

Thanks. The story is no where near ending. A vampire has come up in the next chapter and soon they will be heading to an underwater city where music is illegal and murder is on the prince of the city's mind. After that, one more situation will play out and the ending will come.

Yes... grammar isn't exactly what I am good at...

I would appreciate it if you could tell me, then I could fix them.

I was unsure whether this should go in the fan fic subforum, or the regular Angel of Music forum, so if you feel the need to switch this, please do.

I am currently writing a comic book. I am sorry to say that it is not a fan fic on Phantom, but rather just a story I am writing that I got inspired by many things such as Phantom, Van Helsing, and Beauty and the Beast. It is written in a comic book format and is unfinished. My drawings may be horrible, but I wondered if anyone might be interested in reading it. I do not have a title for it, hence the subject name for this topic. So anyone who would like to give their own oppinion as to what the title should be, go ahead! Again, I realized I am not the greatest artist, but atleast you all get the point as to how the story goes. I have 12 Chapters so far, and shall be updating this forum when I get scan the newest Chapters for anyone who wishes to follow it through to the end.

In order to read it, I have put the pages on Photobucket. The link below is to the prologue of my story. To the left of the drawing and up a bit, you will see a "Back" and "Next" arrow. As confusing as it is, you have to click the back button in order to go further into the story. I have comments for each Chapter Part(Or page) of the story and shall type them all out in a seperate post.

ENJOY!!!

http://s9.photobucket.com/albums/a100 ... reak228/Wolfs%20Drawings/

In almost all my dreams I have been killed in some way. Stabbed, Shot, Carved with a knife, boiled in a big pot, eaten alive, shark attack, etc. Anything that could possibly be ended with death, it has happened in my dreams. Could there be something I am missing?

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It would not surprise me if she did. I do find the habit when I am just sitting there to just scratch... and it does not hurt. You tend to get used to what it feels like. With living with it you get used to knowing when to stop before an open wound gets scratched open. For example, when new people at school finally realize that I have a skin disease, most just give a disgusted look and go away. But rarely some will walk up curiously and want to touch it. So of course when some actually scratch, sometimes they can scratch hard enough to cause a wound to form. That might be what the red is from. Scratching. I am sorry to hear that she died. I don't know how old she was, but a loss is still great no matter the age.

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Hm... well mine does not particularly turn red... Does she have the habit of scraping it off herself?

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As I have said, I do not have the most severe case of it. My symptoms would be much different.

Althought he description shows "Diamond shaped scales", mine are not really.. diamond.. they are small and random really. Much like a snake sheds its own skin, I do as well. Do not freak out, I dont all at once. Random little patches will appear, small like cracks in the skin. Here is how I describe it in my own words to everyone who asks:
"No, it does not hurt, so stop asking. Picture yourself with a cut on your hand. Do you often have a little bit of the dead skin hanging off from scraping it? Now peel it off. Did it hurt? No. That is what I feel. Nothing. Just the fact that I peeled it off. A new layer is underneath, usually smooth."

I cannot really describe what it looks like.. it is very hard to describe. Reptile skin is the closest I could compare it to... My skin just looks like it is very dry to the point of cracking.

My particular disease of Ichthyosis worsens in cold weather. The sun also will worsen it. I hate the sun for if I ever get a sunburn, that is when it is absolutely horrible! Since my skin naturally "sheds" or flakes might be the right word, a sunburn is removing a layer of skin that is not "ready to be shedded". And so it is a large open wound where the sun burn is. Not everyone with Ichthyosis worsens in sunlight though. But all worsen in colder weather.

Lotion does not always work for me. All it does is make it feel smoother, but does not change the look of it. I cannot say it does not help, but you need patience and a lot of it. "Lather it on" as my father says.

Hyperthermia, thank you. Sorry for the inconvenience.

Besides, there is no corrolation between the two songs. They are lyrics in the song much like metaphors. As other before me have said, Christine wishes for them to be happy and be in love. She is not speaking of the masquerade. Only of her their love. It is only a metaphor.

Chipotle?

What is my favorite Phantom?
Michael Crawford
Gerard Butler
Robert Englund

nectarine

I would have to say that my most prized possesion would be my coffin. Indeed, I have one. My uncle built one out of wood and painted it black. I think my grandma thinks of me differently now.... but I am happy with it!

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Harlequin Icthyosis is a skin disorder. Forgive me if I do not have all my facts straight. I know everything there is to know about regular Icthyosis, not to much Harlequin. From what I have read, Harlequin is the most severe form of Icthyosis. It is where the skin is cracked in the shape of diamond scales(Which is why Icthyosis is also called the Fish Scale Disease)instead of being held together like normal. Because of the open wounds, it is so easy for infections to occur. Also, Hypothermia can occure because heat loss isn't very easy. Many do not even survive a few days after birth. But because of new technology, some grow older. In very rare cases, the child could even grow old enough to be an adult. If I have this wrong, perhaps there are other types of Harlequin Icthyosis. But if any of you have any questions about regular Icthyosis, I would be happy to answer them for you. And I assure you that you will have an honest answer, for I am an unlucky owner of this disease. (I suggest not looking up images on google of Icthyosis. For the images do not look much like what I do. But feel free to look if you are curious anyway)

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I would personally go with just "For Phans of Phantom in all its forms" Nothing else.

"Davy Jones" from Pirates of the Carribean 2

Could by pulling the cloth so hard against the reporter's face have broken his nose and it began to bleed be a possibility? It makes sense for the nose, anyway...